Okay, I decided to post my new story. I started it today, and why not try and get some feedback?
As I lay uncomfortably on my floor, staring at my painfully slow laptop and pretending to do homework, I think about that on person you all know but never think about. She gets average grades, she has average looks. Everything about her is average. She tries to blend in, but only because it hurts too much to stand out.
Then I think about how much I want to not be her.
Okay, let's start from the beginning.
My name is Amelia. I pretend I'm everyone's friend, and they pretend to be mine, but everyone can see through the lie. There's only a few people who have proven to be true friends.
"Hey Amelia!" Thank the powers that be. It's Lexie, real friend número uno. Not that there's an order. I just don't think I'd have been able to put on another mask for someone like Monique or Brittany.
"Hey!" I reply with more enthusiasm than usual.
"You look like you needed some saving from these disastrous surroundings," she said with a huge smile as she gestured around the empty library. As I followed her hand with my eyes, I glanced at the clock and gasped.
"Oh, my god! It's already that late?!" The clock told me that school had already been over for an hour.
"Yep," she told me with a smirk. "C'mon. My mom's outside"
"'Kay." I'm never gonna live this one down, I thought as I mentally shook my head and physically gathered my things.
Out in her mom's car, we turned Paramore up all the way and sang the lyrics at the top of our lungs.
That's all I have at the moment. Let me know what ya think!